Saturday, July 7, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - Silver Linings #6

For this week's six, I've chosen another snippet from my work in progress, SILVER LININGS. My previous posts from this WIP are here, where Parker has just walked into Billie's life again after being away for a decade.  Annabelle and May are Billie's great-aunts.

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Here are my six.  There are a couple of scenes between this excerpt and last week's.

When Billie entered the room, Annabelle grinned conspiratorially at May.  Just as Billie was about to ask what was going on, a movement caught her eye - it was Parker.  
What were her great-aunts plotting now? And why was Parker crouched by the wall? 
Then he reached to retrieve something from a toolbox - wow, would you look at the way his jeans stretched over his -
No, no, no! 

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21 comments:

Lisa Fox said...

Um, yes, yes, yes! Lol!

Jessica Subject said...

A fun six! If Parker's involved, I say go for it. :)

Kate Warren said...

I love Annabelle and May! They clearly know what they're doing here.

Carmen DeSousa said...

LOL! Ah you're such a tease. Always just enough to keep us coming back. Can't wait until your book publishes. :)

Mae Clair said...

LOL! Okay that is just TOO good! What a fun six!

Jean Marie Ward said...

You gotta watch out for those aunts. They are sooooo sneaky. And it's great! Fun Six, Lorraine. :-)

Jess Schira said...

I love the aunts, and it sounds like she's being treated to a pretty impressive view! Great six!

sue said...

yes, yes, yes,

K.E. Saxon said...

What Jess said... I'm likin' this guy already =D

Karen de Lange said...

LOL! Will he notice her looking? More to the point - did he do it deliberately so she would look? I'm wondering...

Kate said...

Oh, this is a whole lot of fun! What a lucky girl. Great six, Lorraine.

L.J. Kentowski said...

LOL!!! Loved that last part! Great 6!

Maryellen said...

FUN!! and hot ;)

Veronica Scott said...

I'm chuckling AND wanting to read more! Excellent excerpt, great way to end it...

Teresa Cypher said...

lol! I love it, Lorraine. No one can self-scold a character like you :-)

Ann Swann said...

Haha! Good read...great place to stop, too!

angelaquarles.com said...

Great Deep POV here, I felt like I was right there, and now of course I want to know what he picked up! Love the great aunts :)

Sue Ann Bowling said...

Sounds like her thoughts are going someplace she doesn't want them to.

Teresa Cypher said...

Hey Lorraine, just checking in with you. Hope the moving is going well. :-)

patonlorraine said...

Hi, Teresa!

Thanks. All is good - just a little chaotic. ;) I can't believe we get possession of our new place in two weeks!

Hope all is happy with you! :)

Lorraine

Darlene Maynard said...

wait, stretched over his???? What a good place to end it, it fires the imagination :)