This week, Billie and Parker are attending a local community dance. Her great-aunts and his grandfather have conspired to have Billie and Parker seated next to one another.
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"Would you like to dance?" Parker's voice was low, sending delicious shivers over her.
"I don't really... well, maybe not just now." That eyebrow of his lifted slightly, like he didn't believe her.
"Your foot seems to think otherwise," Parker said, humor vibrating through his words.
Billie glanced under the table - oh, God, she'd been tapping her foot against Parker, not the table leg like she'd thought.
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36 comments:
Cute six! So he's got a leg like a table then?
LOL So cute! Just get up and dance. :)
lolol! I love your characters, Lorraine! My gosh, so perfect! :-) Great six! :-)
I loved it! so funny!
Too perfect! LOL This really made me smile.
Perfect six! :)
lol guess they'll be dancing now :-)
Love it!! I'm smiling :) Awesome six!!
Oh I enjoyed this six! Such fun, the tapping foot and all....this is a terrific story, excellent excerpt!
Excellent - very funny! Well done.
LOL, I hate when that happens.
So funny! Really cute six.
Don't you hate it when that happens! LOL Fun scene. :)
hehe. Fantastic six.
Great 6. I especially like the tag "humor vibrating through his words." Nice!
LOL! That last line is so funny! Great job :)
Too much. *shakes head with grin on her face* So realistic, perfectly syncopated dialogue and POV. Genius. Excellent six, Lorraine!!
LOL! Can't hide that body language, can she? ;)
Well done Auntie and Grandpa. Fun dialogue, Loved it. Will she dance?
Oops, it looks like she invited him before he invited her! Fun six, Lorraine. :)
Love it! Sounds like something's about to brew between them.
As far as embarrassing situations go, it could have been worse, though I doubt she thinks so right at this moment. Very nice job!
Great-Aunts on one side and a grandfather on the other? They're doomed!
oh shit that was funny. Humour vibrating -- great way of saying that
LOL That's great!
The body has a mind of its own! This was sweet and romantic!
Ah-ha-ha! She's gonna end up in his arms, despite herself. :D
How embarrassing! Love this six!
Hahaha!! I love it! Great 6!
Delightful six! I love 'delicious shivers' and when she realizes her mistake. Ooops! Billie has some 'splaining to do, LOL!
It's tragic when your body betrays you, but delightful to read it happening to an unsuspecting character. Totally realistic and enjoyable.
Love the ending! Very entertaining six!
Awesome 6. Poor girl, she's so busted!
awww so cute!
Oh no - mortifying. But at least she can get up and dance now. :)
Oh! Hahahahaha. Yeah, I can see myself doing that. In fact, I have done it - in meetings no less. Awkward.
Great six.
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