Last week, Parker asked Billie is she wanted to dance. This week, they're dancing.
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Saturday, July 28, 2012
Six Sentence Sunday - SILVER LININGS #8
For this week's six, I've chosen another snippet from my work in progress, SILVER LININGS, where Parker has just walked into Billie's life again after being away for a decade. My previous posts from this WIP are here.
Last week, Parker asked Billie is she wanted to dance. This week, they're dancing.
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Parker shifted her hand in his, entwining his fingers with hers. Billie tensed, but didn't pull away. Then he started to rub
small circles on her palm with his thumb, like he used to do when they made love. Each caress sent ripples of awareness through her. She almost tripped over the memories, but
her body was unconcerned with thought, it just moved with Parker’s. Just as it always had.
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Last week, Parker asked Billie is she wanted to dance. This week, they're dancing.
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Thank you for stopping by to read my Six Sentence Sunday post.
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14 comments:
This is nice, Lorraine. "Just like it always had." You might be the queen of last lines, lady! ;-) Nice six. :-)
I really like this. I love the sensual feel of them dancing, the emotional pull between them, her reminiscence. Lovely. And I agree. That's a fantastic last line. Fabulous six!
Sexy snippet. He's clearly a sensual guy. Great six!
ooh hot!
Very sensual six. I can really see them dancing together.
Delicate and romantic.
Very good. I like the imagery of almost tripping over the memories.
Very sweet and romantic. Love "tripping" while they're dancing.
Awww! This was so sweet! I loved the line about tripping over her memories! Great 6!
tripped over memories - good one! They certainly have history...
muscles memory doing its wicked thing, so sweet and romantic. Loved it.
So sensual and sweet. I love that she has all these memories building up inside, trapped beneath the surface. History makes for mystery and great sensuality :)
I love this line-She almost tripped over the memories,-Well done!
So sexy and romantic! I love the intimacy they have with each other.
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